boatgirl by ~weevilgirl on deviantART
she sets the sun ablaze with her stare
and as the smell of stars chokes up the air
the wind blows on in purple gusts
and the grass puts on a coat of rust
...she turns away from her reflection
projected by the bruised sun...
dead trees red seas and bright blue curls
she melts away as her tale unfurls
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yes i know I FUCKED IT UP BIG
and i KNOW i have no right to mutilate beautiful sheets of white paper like this but gah.
but , fullview it makes it look better.
9 comments:
You have bat bogeys for a brain.
This is awesome!
I loved the way you showed the trees.
GAH.
And you have such amazing vision!
Double GAH.
Wonderful painting!
And the poem is awesome!
[Secret : I am a big big fan of your poetry. I just labh Of Acoustic Dreams]
[b] :Dajdajhsgdjgasdasgdjh!!!
@LD GAHNESSALLOVER.
@lucifer- ooooothatsSUCHanhonour
:D
thankyousovaryvarythemucchly
erm...confession time,am a fan of your poetry too.
:P
and and....i love the painting,you so didnot *fuck* it up..nope,no more arguments,since i have already adjudged.ahem *feeling self important*..now let the case rest..we all loveth it!
*yayness*
Yes yes. It was truly terrible. See? I can rhyme too :p
But why is it colorful and nice?
nice duck!
oh i really thought it luked like a proud duck!
oh well, on the second thoughts maybe a duck-boat!
title says boat-girl but i really cudnt relate to it.
"she sets the sun ablaze with her stare and the smell of stars chokes uo the air"
LOOKS great..smells greater!
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