the balcony; and it was dark
and i had stepped back at that moment
the dream was ripe.
lost since then
fallen out and strangers in the mist
and in the midst of a thousand different,
fashionable silhouettes
with hidden eyes, and magnets
lost? and blotted out..
crooked lines and a laugh or two
dipped in coffee or milk
or a few surface notes;chords
once in seven months and weeks i don't count
and today
some sentences in the poetry book
and the ants somewhere disturbing
make remember
of an unrecalled existence
and of a time
when
i stepped back and you vanished.
8 comments:
yknow... you should really be studying. :P
in the midst of a thousand different,
fashionable silhouettes
with hidden eyes, and magnets
lost? and blotted out..
i quite like it
i really like it too [:P]..if only you studied with equal zeal..*rolls eyes*
These things come to your mind just when you have a lot of stuff to study.
Brilliant, right?
I liked the imagery. :]
its okay.
i understand.
you are as sane as i am.
Embarrassed, are you?
Bad girl. Gostudyrightnow.
And, uh, good post.
The visualization is simple but comes of really nicely..
Hats off..
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