15/12/08,
9:16 PM
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i will now write you a poem titled 'because',
a poem holding no reasons to negate.
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what makes a cave is the wall drawings. what makes
an ocean is the borders, bord- oh no the lack of them. what
makes a bird is bones obsessed with emptiness
and elbowroom. what makes a cave is you standing outside, wondering
what it hides and pushing in an arm whispering you're
beautiful as you sense the dark (take it back
along with your arm).what makes an ocean salt water
and nothing more is the shark circling around a ship, thinking that the
ship is big enough for itself and it needs no more.
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i will now stop pretending that i'm still going to
call this because.
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what makes a ship is the plimsoll line (ignored)
what breaks a poem is the loose ends let loose.
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4 comments:
Shark circling a ship. xP
That's all I have to say xD
Also, my word verification: digrat
AND I DOUBT TOO MANY PEOPLE ACTUALLY KNOW WHAT A PLIMSOLL IS GAHSAHSDGFDGRFD.
Word verification: domph
omg.
you've grown up.
:O
congo.
either this is one of the most carefully and well-written things you've ever done, or you're pure fucking GENIUS
I'm inclined to think it's both
a poem holding no reasons to negate. HAH. I almost missed that one the first time through.
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